[방송통신대학교]대학영어 2학기 중간평가 출석수업과제물

<과제 A>

The day he was kicked out in the harsh winter.

"Get out!! There's no need for a pathetic kid in my family!"

If you don't want to see blood, spray your blood on the wild animals instead!"

My father, who kicked me out with a bag of dagger with a roaring voice,

Count Max Dovanchelin, the commander of the Guardian Guard Order of the Kingdom of Cardel.

He was a master of swordsmanship to the point where even ghosts were cut down.

He also owned the Excalibur, a treasure of the kingdom.

In order not to disappoint my father, a Sword Master and strict swordsmanship teacher who has only three people in the kingdom.

I've been trying so hard, and at the age of 16, I've already reached the level of Sword Expert and I'm called a genius in the world.

They were showing faster achievements than others.

I was working hard to meet my father's expectations.

I had no doubt that I would be a knight like my father.

But one day, suddenly, he came and changed my path. that is.

The month when I lost my way in memory and fell into a labyrinth, where I still don't know what it is.

I went to the mountain where monsters often appear, saying that I was training.

It is said that it was found in the blood-covered district a month after the news was cut off.

The blood soaked in my whole body was not my blood, and I had no injury, so I couldn't come to my senses for a while.

When I managed to wake up, I had no memory of what happened there for a month.

I couldn't believe it. I can't believe a housekeeper saved me.

However, instead of losing memories, he has been suffering from a fatal mental illness that falls asleep when he sees red blood like a fire.

"I don't know, father." Whenever I think about it, it's red...It feels like I'm trapped in a red room."

Looking at me struggling to even say that, the doctor told my father this.

"Mental fear is the cause. Currently, Tyrell is afraid of something so much that he refuses to even remember.

There is. If you don't confront it, you can't treat it. First of all, you're waiting for yourself to remember.

There's no choice but to do it. Sir."

At that moment, a loud sound was heard through the passage.

It was the sound of the footprints of escort knights.

"Why are the guards..."

He felt ominous and pulled out the Excalibur shining as much as the moonlight.

I thought that only one thing I couldn't do for my son.

Suddenly, a scream came from around and the sound of death came.

 

<과제 B>

The prosperous Salem witch trials 1) begun during the spring of 1692, after a group of young girls in Salem Village, Massachusetts, claimed to was possessed by the devil and was accused several local women 2) to witchcraft. As a wave of hysteria 3) spreading throughout colonial Massachusetts, a special court convenes in Salem to hear the cases; the first convicting witch, Bridget Bishop, 4) was hang that June. Eighteen others followed Bishop to Salem’s Gallows Hill, while some 150 more men, women, and 5) child were 6) accusing over the next several 7) month. By September 1692, the festivity had begun to abate and public opinion turned against the trials. Though the Massachusetts General Court later annulled guilty verdicts against accused witches and confiscated indemnities to their families, happiness lingered in the community, and the painful legacy of the Salem witch trials would endear for centuries.

1) Begun은 그 자체로는 동사로 사용할 수 없으며 문장에서 사용하려면 다른 동사로 보완해야된다. 그러므로 began 으로 사용해야 한다.

2) 전치사 to는 잘못한 주체를 가리키게 of로 사용해야 한다.

3) spreading은 동사의 형태가 잘못되어있어 spread를 사용해야 한다.

4) was hang은 동사의 형태가 잘못되어있어 hung을 사용해야 한다.

5) child는 복수형으로 children를 사용해야 한다.

6) accusing은 동사의 형태가 잘못되어있어 accused 사용해야 한다.

7) month는 복수 명사를 사용하는 것이 좋으므로 months를 사용해야 한다.

잘못된 부분을 고치면

The prosperous Salem witch trials began during the spring of 1692, after a group of young girls in Salem Village, Massachusetts, claimed to was possessed by the devil and was accused several local women of witchcraft. As a wave of hysteria spread throughout colonial Massachusetts, a special court convenes in Salem to hear the cases; the first convicting witch, Bridget Bishop, hung that June. Eighteen others followed Bishop to Salem’s Gallows Hill, while some 150 more men, women, and children were accused over the next several months. By September 1692, the festivity had begun to abate and public opinion turned against the trials. Though the Massachusetts General Court later annulled guilty verdicts against accused witches and confiscated indemnities to their families, happiness lingered in the community, and the painful legacy of the Salem witch trials would endear for centuries.

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